Editing: IB cheating story

Published: Granite Bay Gazette Vol. 19, Issue 4. Thursday, Dec. 17, 2015.

Category: Editing

Reason for publication: My friend and fellow staff member, Anjali Shrivastava, wrote this story about the culture of International Baccalaureate classes and the proposed cheating which surrounds the IB program. Seen below are the edits I made to the story.


 

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Editing: Revisions on opinion piece

Published: Granite Bay Gazette, Vol. 19, Issue 5. Friday, Feb. 5, 2016.

Category: Editing

Reason for publication: A fellow staffer on the Gazette wrote a voices (opinion) piece which I helped edit for publication. The blue edits were made by me, the story was written by Caroline Palmer.


 

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